Opinions please? And no I'm not suicidal.?

I personally am not too much of a rhyming fan, I think most of the time it doesnt make the poem sound to its full depth. But on the other hand it did sound very good. I always thought to be that sorrow and unhappiness is one of the best subjects for a poem as it's one of the most profound emotions a human can feel. So overall I think it's really good. Even though it did rhyme and to me it seemed a bit amateur, I was still able to connect and feel all the intensity of the poem. Very well done!